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Old 06-29-2007, 04:38 AM   #24 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by sccs View Post
I listen and memories all Alex_Party advice. He is the one who give me feedback and I re-design my website. I know is under develop but I like to learn from mistake and improve myself. Please tell me more about my website weakness.
Well it's a good quality of yours to accept the criticisms and hope u learn from those criticisms. Ok let me tell few of those as most of them are told by other experts here:
1. Make your website for online viewers and not for search engines.When i vsited your site first, i had the impression that I have landed into a "Lost site" i.e the site does'nt exists anymore. your site look like that. In your site, I am not impressed with the colors. I liked the header "Billgizz" where u have used the Google's coloring effect..isnt it?
2.Good bit of SEO Copywriting is very needed for you site. Do you know what SEO Copywriting is? If u dont know then pls read this small article of about SEO Copywriting
3. Many Typos like for example Excercise & Fitness , Jewelry & Watches , Massage & Relaxation and lots of others stuffs. u need to work on them.
4. Technically, ur site dont look sound.u need to improve on that too

Well, first work these basic things. Grab the attention of the customers and not confuse them, with your site. Hope this helps!!
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