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Originally Posted by Laurent Van Winckel
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Originally Posted by IamTheKing9
It is pretty good as a story, though not that much as a poem.
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It's not supposed to be a real poem, I just want to express my feelings, whatever kind of text it is. |
If it's not supposed to be a real poem, and you wrote it as a story, then, as I wrote, it
is pretty good.