here's a poem

[encaged_by_rage]

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[Raz]

I think its creative, but the colors hurts my eyes, lol

[IamTheKing9]

This is... amazing. You got an incredible vocabulary, and you've made full use of it, getting most rhymes right.
Plus, the poem's quite creative. Though I think you shouldn't use the word "but" two times in -
But not King at all, but a child laying on the floor.
And oh, the colours are hurting my eyes. You should darken that green.