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Old 04-18-2009, 08:09 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Exclamation I am a man

I have grown in more ways then one into a man

As I walk miles and miles upon Iraq's sand

I have seen what most would say is death

The last moment of peace before the last breathe

They say it is what you see that molds you

And as I get older I know more and more what to do

Time slips ever so faster and the years come and go

As what I have seen I must share I must show

I will take what experience I have gained and use it in life

As a guideline to show me the way through the pain and strife

The ways of the world still so unknown and hard to read

As I try to make my mark or atleast plant my seed

I have grown in more ways then one into a man

But yet I feel I will not be able to escape the sand in Iran


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Old 08-09-2009, 10:10 PM   #2 (permalink)
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poem or prose? Anyway, i read something.
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