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Old 10-23-2005, 05:00 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Oh ma luv
I've been dreamin'
about j00
every passing day
I thought
dat j00 liked meh
I've luved j00
for about 1 year
then dis one day
dat single day
has changed everthin'
why ma love
did j00 fool me
oh so depressed dat I am
crying all nite
all those unanswered questions
in my head
will I ever know teh truth?

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Well, that one day was yesterday =(
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Old 10-23-2005, 05:02 AM   #2 (permalink)
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lol ROFLMAO.
I know why you wrote it and what it is about, and to be honest, it is pathetic, but deep down, I like it.
It is time to move on. She is ugly anyway.
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Old 10-23-2005, 08:55 AM   #3 (permalink)
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It is pretty good as a story, though not that much as a poem.
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Old 10-23-2005, 09:12 AM   #4 (permalink)
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It is pretty good as a story, though not that much as a poem.
It's not supposed to be a real poem, I just want to express my feelings, whatever kind of text it is.
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i think someone is hurt !! may be beacuse someone threw a bomb on his bus!
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Old 10-23-2005, 07:46 PM   #6 (permalink)
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It is pretty good as a story, though not that much as a poem.
It's not supposed to be a real poem, I just want to express my feelings, whatever kind of text it is.
If it's not supposed to be a real poem, and you wrote it as a story, then, as I wrote, it is pretty good.
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Old 10-24-2005, 01:36 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Hmm.. a little immature..
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Yeah, Laurent is a sore loser at life. The girl he has written about didn't like him to begin with...
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*cough*lmao*cough*..
heh hem.. What a shame!
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What is even more sad about him is that he reads e-books about dating, love and relationships. He even showed me one on MSN. He wanted to send it to me, but I wouldn't have read it even if I was unlucky at love. To read such things, you have extinguish your self-respect... :/
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