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Old 01-25-2006, 08:27 AM   #1 (permalink)
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‘ Can’t Imagine ‘

I just can’ t imagine how it would be, to look in your eyes and feel them loving me.
You say we are never to be, can’ t you see its hurting me.
Wrote this 11 years ago I was in love lol god when i think back i cringe when i see him now lol
Love to know what ya think?

Every morn’ I wake to find your on my mind.

I miss you touch, I miss your smile. Oh please God!! Help me get by.
I see you with her and it hurts me so much, to know that she now has your touch.

I just can’ t imagine how it would be, to hold you in my arms for eternity.

I look in your eyes and I can’ t help but feel, you don’ t care too much for me.
Someday I hope to make you see that I will love you eternally.
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Old 01-26-2006, 09:20 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I had the same feelings once....
you opened some of my abandoned wounds
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Old 01-30-2006, 11:16 PM   #3 (permalink)
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nice poem...
but i like poem that will encourage me. coz im so pathetic.
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Old 04-13-2006, 06:22 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Nice Feelings
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Old 04-13-2006, 02:44 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Excellent vision. Brought back some old memories before the wife...(shhhhhh, she'd ignore me for a year!)
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Old 08-27-2006, 04:44 PM   #6 (permalink)
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eric cartman says---thats sooooooooo gay!
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Old 05-19-2007, 02:23 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Great Poem. that's not so gay lol.
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Old 05-19-2007, 03:15 AM   #8 (permalink)
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you'll find someone else and when you have, you'll look back to those days when you had these thoughts and think how stupid I was spending my days crying about that man! Just keep looking!
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nice poem. I like it
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Its good, I like your poem...
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