My Poem, "The Traveller".

[thecodemaster]

I wrote this when I was in Year 5 in primary school!

The Traveller

P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal"SPAN lang=EN-GB style="FONT-SIZE: 13pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Book Antiqua'; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB"The traveller rapped on the wooden door,?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-comfficeffice" /o/o[/color]/IP class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal"SPAN lang=EN-GB style="FONT-SIZE: 13pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Book Antiqua'; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB"Gently but firmly, not much more.o/o[/color]/IP class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal"SPAN lang=EN-GB style="FONT-SIZE: 13pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Book Antiqua'; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB"He spoke through, at his dare,o/o[/color]/IP class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal"SPAN lang=EN-GB style="FONT-SIZE: 13pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Book Antiqua'; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB"Asking if anyone was there.o/o[/color]/IP class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal"SPAN lang=EN-GB style="FONT-SIZE: 13pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Book Antiqua'; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB"o/o[/color]/IP class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal"SPAN lang=EN-GB style="FONT-SIZE: 13pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Book Antiqua'; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB"Silence from the horse, amongst the ferns,o/o[/color]/IP class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal"SPAN lang=EN-GB style="FONT-SIZE: 13pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Book Antiqua'; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB"The forest like a jungle, full of turns.o/o[/color]/IP class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal"SPAN lang=EN-GB style="FONT-SIZE: 13pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Book Antiqua'; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB"No one answering from inside the house,o/o[/color]/IP class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal"SPAN lang=EN-GB style="FONT-SIZE: 13pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Book Antiqua'; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB"Not a sound, not the squeak of a mouse.o/o[/color]/IP class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal"SPAN lang=EN-GB style="FONT-SIZE: 13pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Book Antiqua'; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB"o/o[/color]/IP class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal"SPAN lang=EN-GB style="FONT-SIZE: 13pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Book Antiqua'; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB"The moonlight came down like a silver blade,o/o[/color]/IP class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal"SPAN lang=EN-GB style="FONT-SIZE: 13pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Book Antiqua'; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB"Creepy and quiet, but still he stayed.o/o[/color]/IP class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal"SPAN lang=EN-GB style="FONT-SIZE: 13pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Book Antiqua'; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB"The path was glowing like a silver ribbon,o/o[/color]/IP class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal"SPAN lang=EN-GB style="FONT-SIZE: 13pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Book Antiqua'; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB"And yet the house stood quiet and hidden.o/o[/color]/IP class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal"SPAN lang=EN-GB style="FONT-SIZE: 13pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Book Antiqua'; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB"o/o[/color]/IP class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal"SPAN lang=EN-GB style="FONT-SIZE: 13pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Book Antiqua'; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB"He stood perplexed, still, by the door,o/o[/color]/IP class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal"SPAN lang=EN-GB style="FONT-SIZE: 13pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Book Antiqua'; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB"Some birds flew over, this he saw.o/o[/color]/IP class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal"SPAN lang=EN-GB style="FONT-SIZE: 13pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Book Antiqua'; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB"He banged on the door for a second time,o/o[/color]/IP class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal"SPAN lang=EN-GB style="FONT-SIZE: 13pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Book Antiqua'; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB"This time a sound, but just a clock chime.o/o[/color]/IP class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal"SPAN lang=EN-GB style="FONT-SIZE: 13pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Book Antiqua'; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB"o/o[/color]/IP class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal"SPAN lang=EN-GB style="FONT-SIZE: 13pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Book Antiqua'; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB"No head was seen from the window sill,o/o[/color]/IP class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal"SPAN lang=EN-GB style="FONT-SIZE: 13pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Book Antiqua'; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB"He stayed glued to the spot, confused and still.o/o[/color]/IP class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal"SPAN lang=EN-GB style="FONT-SIZE: 13pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Book Antiqua'; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB"The house remained silent, ‘twas a mournful grave,o/o[/color]/IP class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal"SPAN lang=EN-GB style="FONT-SIZE: 13pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Book Antiqua'; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB"Nothing but cobwebs, he had to stay brave.o/o[/color]/IP class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal"SPAN lang=EN-GB style="FONT-SIZE: 13pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Book Antiqua'; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB"o/o[/color]/IP class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal"SPAN lang=EN-GB style="FONT-SIZE: 13pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Book Antiqua'; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB"He imagined ghosts, a chilling feeling,o/o[/color]/IP class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal"SPAN lang=EN-GB style="FONT-SIZE: 13pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Book Antiqua'; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB"They’re underneath the ghastly ceiling.o/o[/color]/IP class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal"SPAN lang=EN-GB style="FONT-SIZE: 13pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Book Antiqua'; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB"Complete silence now, no knock, no bird,o/o[/color]/IP class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal"SPAN lang=EN-GB style="FONT-SIZE: 13pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Book Antiqua'; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB"The traveller said, “Tell them I came and I kept my word.”o/o[/color]/IP class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal"SPAN lang=EN-GB style="FONT-SIZE: 13pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Book Antiqua'; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB"o/o[/color]/IP class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal"SPAN lang=EN-GB style="FONT-SIZE: 13pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Book Antiqua'; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB"With a swish of his cloak,o/o[/color]/IP class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal"SPAN lang=EN-GB style="FONT-SIZE: 13pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Book Antiqua'; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB"He jumped on his horse,o/o[/color]/IP class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal"SPAN lang=EN-GB style="FONT-SIZE: 13pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Book Antiqua'; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB"Sound of metal on stone,o/o[/color]/IP class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"I style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal"SPAN lang=EN-GB style="FONT-SIZE: 13pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Book Antiqua'; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB"He galloped off on his own.o/o[/color]/I

[devang]

Good one, Enjoyed it

[gogol]

Good poem. I hope hear about you like a important writer.

[encaged_by_rage]

hey that was a great poem. I could really feel the atmisphere you were trying to create. U described the surroundings and the feelings beautifully.. keep writting more poems. i would love to read another!