Trying my hand at rap.

[Eric]

I still dislike rap, so don't take this the wrong way(that is, don't think I've changed my mind or have become a hippy, or anything like Eminem)...
Right! Here I go, two raps!

No. 1:
I'm back!
by Eric
Now hear this!
Special request at the popular demand,
your little wish is my command.
You make me scream
You're mine all the time
I'll never stop lovin'
till the break of dawn.
Spring time is here,
beauty everywhere.
How could I share
without you near.
One of a kind,
and you blow my mind!

No. 2:
Don't end up like the rest!
by Eric
Terry's in the place,
better give some space.
Not here to impress,
neither to give stress.
Damn he's good,
and damn bad.
Just do your best,
so he can rest.
Who else is first?
None but the best!



That is all.
(My mind got shocked by lightning from a recent brainstorm!)

Terry, Terry, Terry.

[Çãt JåÐí$]

Erm.. great rapping there, Eric :s

[Paul123]

Lol, just don't take it up as a profession ...

[Stuff2Do]

nice rap, even tho i HATE rap

[Çãt JåÐí$]

hehe I can rap pretty well...

[dude66]

sound man

[darrenstraight]

Ive never done rap in my life so all yours is all good to me.

[Fun4Free]

nice rap their man i wroted one too last night cause i was bored, i dont love rap and dont hate it, its fun to do sometimes for me though... I had a rap battle with some guy on a hip hop site, pretty fun to do but im a newbie and they all soo good but anyway heres the 2nd load i give him which he liked:

man you could be a comedian pulling this shit,
you must think you can rap n dis to the piss,
dont crack me up, take a seat while i joke and jack u up,
twizzle you, turn you, shit i think ima hurt you,
you guessed my name doug, marty boi it is so use it well,
remember it as the dominatrix of rap against u,
no dont laugh yet im no finished with you, and doug fuck ur crew,
i'll smash you, rhyme you, spit you and decap you through,
fuck 2, fuck 3, fuck 4 lets hit the 5 and make sure these sticks suit the pricks who suck these dicks,
remember the tricks for the licks, no clits just the bits that you can touch with ur mothers candle wicks,
its 5am and im in the uk roasting ur ass from a turntable so try n open up your eyes, there aint no more tries because ur the only one that cries and sits telling these lies. u think u can win but think again when u awaken your pit n sit wishing you didnt suck on that last dick!!!!
hold, can you gimmee a sec to write you out a check,
because my rap has just knocked ur ass to the deck,
dont worry you dont needa get up i will find my own way to the winners trophy cup,
dont bother sending ur reply because i already wacked u n i know ur thinking of saying goodbye incase i embarass you,


Third rap back

i see you have thought about this shit,
but the thing is im about to re-brake it,
i think you needa learn to spit ur making me wanna smash this shit, the shit you call rhyming when really the only thing ur commiting is, a suicide crime-ring,
a quick shout out to my man without the black ass tan,
the one and only he is the blue ass rap man clan,
yo u think u can beat the one and only,
he uses the name because hes the only one before me,
we spit n rip n brake all of ur stupid ass shit, before you can stand up we brake you up n spit you out around the sun,
yo chris man reply to the one and only he the one killing you slowly, you scared to reply or died got tied come on man try and slide the ride,
i read through your reply and get side tracked, by my mind making up all these good ass rhymes which then back me up, for this times when i wack u up n lay u out man ur not worth 2 dimers so shut em up,
back on track with the kanibel man, i just opened a woop ass can, your shocked ur doped i think you got choked by the marty mister with the biggest ass ropes,
you only got upto to line fucking 10 and already your trembling in your mothers bed, today, get out man you cock sucking dike liker gimmee some fight before my ass gets any tighter,
marty man you heared him go,
you listend in on his rap ass show,
he rapped, he rhymed but never got timed,
he the man who you dont want in mind!!!

you ever heared of 2 winners, no not a draw man thats only for beginners, i have beat your ass so bear, i rhymed you out it seems so clear, dont come back, or i'll be forced to pull out my jack hammers snair which is rare because i normally beat the fuckers with one tear its fair and square....
kanibel, yo yo kanibel, he aint nothing but a dumb ass fucking animal he reminds me of some guy named dr tarananamow, he was a dumb fuck had no style, no rhymes no spitting talent to go on and make the show anything but so dramatical,
yo yo its bling bling, the master of disaster who gave you that terror ass ring sting, sorry man im too gay i fucked u hard each coming day, so i could stay and get your lay and a play with ur raps cause they nothing but toys to play wit n laugh at,
marty is out, marty will be back, marty will throw a fucknig house party, kanibel aint invited or i'll have to rapanise him with my words he wont keep up and he will die a slow death behind me,

[Eric]

^ nice. I bet the 1st rap was directed at me, but okay, it was cool. Heh... Truce I guess...

[microdude431]

i hate rap in general.