please review my site

idansh · 06-02-2007, 10:00 PM

I tried for the second time to hear your opinion, because of many other threads nobody noticed mine, so please: seo tool website

alex-party · 06-03-2007, 04:01 AM

Hi,

The web site looks good, but it's not organized properly...I mean there is no site menu at all. It's 1 page web site, but it seems like there are 20 links, but all of them leads to another web sites. Those links on the bottom, might be smaller size, as they're not what people came for. Also, news on the left needs some heading, say "NEWS & UPDATES". Remove "SEO Tools uws...." on the top, as this is not your logo, neither it's a link. Make some space on the page, don't bundle everything in one place. Help does not work too.

Do you know what are the most important rules of design? First comes the heading or logo - is what captures your eyes. Then comes the content - this is what you offer. Then and only then comes everything else.

And most important part - I could not figure out what tool for ???!?!?? Maybe a bit explanation below the form.

Hope it helps,

idansh · 06-03-2007, 05:08 AM

First thanks for the comment. This tool is for getting your website position , the position of your website, Page number and Link position in page using the keywords you input and your website url.

I will do some of the changes you mentioned above.

alex-party · 06-03-2007, 05:26 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by idansh

This tool is for getting your website position...

Yes, please add some explanation, It should say something like "This tool searches your web site position among results returned by entered keywords", because I could not figure out what keywords I should type in at the first place...

Good day,

THE:MASTER · 06-03-2007, 11:38 AM

alex is always the person to ask about ur website

ravenclaw22 · 06-03-2007, 11:32 PM

Nice tool. But try to be more detailed with the information.

toinkzzz · 06-04-2007, 09:08 AM

I think you compress your site... make your layout size width to 720px to look compressed and looks much more organized...

alex-party · 06-04-2007, 03:34 PM

Hey, idansh!! It looks much better now, but I also noticed you have stuffed ~100 keywords at the bottom - remove them straight away or google will ban you if they finds out....

archaznable · 06-05-2007, 12:00 AM

the only thing that I find in your website is that its not organized. You need to organized everything well in order. So that your visitors will not be confused. And also the colors is very common Black and White. You need to have a good design if you want to have visitors coming back for more. Design is also essential in web building.

idansh · 06-06-2007, 03:02 PM

first, thkx for the replies, I removed the keywords, even though because I have many countries names in the drop down list, I have problem to make the important words statn out. but I will do some of the changes you gave me. please add more soon.

06-02-2007, 10:00 PM	#1 (permalink)
idansh Senior Googler Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 246 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	please review my site I tried for the second time to hear your opinion, because of many other threads nobody noticed mine, so please: seo tool website

06-04-2007, 03:34 PM	#8 (permalink)
alex-party Elite Googler Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Ireland Posts: 1,085 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	Hey, idansh!! It looks much better now, but I also noticed you have stuffed ~100 keywords at the bottom - remove them straight away or google will ban you if they finds out.... Last edited by alex-party; 06-04-2007 at 05:28 PM.

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06-03-2007, 04:01 AM	#2 (permalink)
alex-party Elite Googler Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Ireland Posts: 1,085 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	Hi, The web site looks good, but it's not organized properly...I mean there is no site menu at all. It's 1 page web site, but it seems like there are 20 links, but all of them leads to another web sites. Those links on the bottom, might be smaller size, as they're not what people came for. Also, news on the left needs some heading, say "NEWS & UPDATES". Remove "SEO Tools uws...." on the top, as this is not your logo, neither it's a link. Make some space on the page, don't bundle everything in one place. Help does not work too. Do you know what are the most important rules of design? First comes the heading or logo - is what captures your eyes. Then comes the content - this is what you offer. Then and only then comes everything else. And most important part - I could not figure out what tool for ???!?!?? Maybe a bit explanation below the form. Hope it helps,

06-03-2007, 05:08 AM	#3 (permalink)
idansh Senior Googler Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 246 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	First thanks for the comment. This tool is for getting your website position , the position of your website, Page number and Link position in page using the keywords you input and your website url. I will do some of the changes you mentioned above.

06-03-2007, 11:38 AM	#5 (permalink)
THE:MASTER Googler Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: bolton,uk Posts: 70 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 1 Post	alex is always the person to ask about ur website

06-03-2007, 11:32 PM	#6 (permalink)
ravenclaw22 Google Freak Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 275 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Nice tool. But try to be more detailed with the information.

06-04-2007, 09:08 AM	#7 (permalink)
toinkzzz Master Googler Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 952 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	I think you compress your site... make your layout size width to 720px to look compressed and looks much more organized...

06-05-2007, 12:00 AM	#9 (permalink)
archaznable Google Freak Join Date: May 2007 Location: Philippines Posts: 492 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	the only thing that I find in your website is that its not organized. You need to organized everything well in order. So that your visitors will not be confused. And also the colors is very common Black and White. You need to have a good design if you want to have visitors coming back for more. Design is also essential in web building.

06-06-2007, 03:02 PM	#10 (permalink)
idansh Senior Googler Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 246 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	first, thkx for the replies, I removed the keywords, even though because I have many countries names in the drop down list, I have problem to make the important words statn out. but I will do some of the changes you gave me. please add more soon.

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