site reviews needed!

[cysite]

can someone please review my site and tell me what you think? compyware.moonfruit.com

[nullvariable]

link: http://compyware.moonfruit.com/

Not bad. The look and feel are nice. I would make quite a few changes elsewhere.

First, your HTML doesn't validate. 35 errors is pretty high. Fixing those will help with browser compatibility and keep problems from happening with the code later on. Your page loads pretty quick but you've got to lose the flash. Loading the whole file in flash make it harder if not impossible for search engines to index your site and keeps people with older computers or slower connections from viewing your site. Work on the JavaScript too. If I load the site with JavaScript disabled it's blank, no content. In regards to the content, it seems a bit lacking and this is key to getting new members.

Good luck!

NV

[JOKERz]

Too weight for simple site....
You need to reduce the size i think......

[fire_lady]

You have a nice design. Pretty clean.
But there are links that shows blank page.


Good luck...

[cysite]

Thanks, nullvariable by flash do you mean the loading bar at the top of the screen?

[nullvariable]

well actually the whole site appears to be generated from a, pardon the term, 'cheesy' auto site builder type program. That program for whatever reason renders everything into flash. Not just the top banner.

[cysite]

yeah, any ideah of any other TOTALLY FREE hosts? i like moonfruit but i understand that lots of pc cant view the page. anybody know of any thing i need to add on the site?

[Pixel]

'cheesy' auto site builder type program

Thanks for stating the obvious it clearly says "Created in Site Builder" in the bottom corner.

Center the plam pilot pic.

[nullvariable]

'cheesy' auto site builder type program

Thanks for stating the obvious it clearly says "Created in Site Builder" in the bottom corner.

Center the plam pilot pic.

Sorry dude its been a view days since I was on the site. I just went by memory.

[RatPat]

I cant even get to the site. Period. Lol I like moonfruit, But its not the best. If you want a free site try Geocities or Tripod.

[letitbe]

it's not on you own domain. it's a lovely site but i don't think you could do anything with it as far as SEO goes.

[Pixel]

For buisness sites you have to buy your own hosting or server.

You don't see Wal-Mart's site on freewebs.com.

[cysite]

yeah i cant really buy a host because im like only 12 and ive got a tight "budget". It is not really a buisness website. I am gonna completely change it because the home page is crappy and it needs more. Is there anyway some people can join so i can get the website active ( its been up for like 1/2 a year?

thanks

Ben

[Pixel]

1/2 a year?! My site was up for 1 day and got like 5 members.

Have your parents create you a paypal account. Buy hosting with that.

[nullvariable]

yep...real hosting is very cheap now days...you can get a domain name for $7-8 or less and hosting for less than $5/month too.

Just Google it there are lots of options out there

NV

[cysite]

lol i have! Ive been looking for like 7 months and havent found anything worth it. How would you sugest that i get members/ visitors for my site. Its submited to 40 search engines. Is there anyone here that can help me with building my website? if so please PM me.

Thanks

ben

[mondine]

One word of advice. Particularly when you have as little original content as you do, take great care in presenting it.
In this case, spelling does matter, if you want to be taken seriously.

When I look at at game review, and see "Its defenatly worth number one", it just creates the impression that you're sloppy, or uncaring about the impression you make. Check, and re-check.

If you're going to host and moderate a site and forum, a big part of the product is you. It's important to keep appearances competent and professional.

[cysite]

Ok thanks for telling me ive really really changed the site!!

[cysite]

im sorry for double posting but its been 3 months and i really really am in desperate need of members! please join! by the way i seriously updated it. compyware.moonfruit.com

please join the forums

[mondine]

You might get more people coming by for a look, if you made your signature into a 'clickable' link, using the forum BBcode.