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PostPosted: Sun Apr 02, 2006 5:47 pm    Post subject: Political haiku Reply with quote
Thinking of the Feinstein, rather than the mold Gold
She's got the stones
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Canadian inferiority complex
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Real estate speculation in California
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Park money, send maids and restaurateurs into the street
 
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 03, 2006 2:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Im not sure if these classify as haiku's.... A haiku by definition is....
 
n. pl. haiku, also hai·kus
  1. A Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.
  2. A poem written in this form.

http://dictionary.reference.com/search?q=haiku

 

Yours is neither unrhymed or the right amount of syllables.Heres an example of a haiku....

old pond

a frog leaps into

the water of sound

on a bare branch

a crow settles down

autumn dusk

Notice short, and not so many syllables, also no rhyming.


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PostPosted: Mon Apr 03, 2006 9:52 pm    Post subject: Nice try Reply with quote
Yeah; a Japanese lyric verse. These are translations.

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 08, 2006 1:05 pm    Post subject: good bye GOP Reply with quote
you  GOP creeps did yourself in. as Maclaughlin would say  bye bye!
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