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PostPosted: Sat Mar 18, 2006 12:56 pm    Post subject: My Poem, "The Traveller". Reply with quote
I wrote this when I was in Year 5 in primary school!
 
The Traveller
 

The traveller rapped on the wooden door,

Gently but firmly, not much more.

He spoke through, at his dare,

Asking if anyone was there.

 

Silence from the horse, amongst the ferns,

The forest like a jungle, full of turns.

No one answering from inside the house,

Not a sound, not the squeak of a mouse.

 

The moonlight came down like a silver blade,

Creepy and quiet, but still he stayed.

The path was glowing like a silver ribbon,

And yet the house stood quiet and hidden.

 

He stood perplexed, still, by the door,

Some birds flew over, this he saw.

He banged on the door for a second time,

This time a sound, but just a clock chime.

 

No head was seen from the window sill,

He stayed glued to the spot, confused and still.

The house remained silent, ‘twas a mournful grave,

Nothing but cobwebs, he had to stay brave.

 

He imagined ghosts, a chilling feeling,

They’re underneath the ghastly ceiling.

Complete silence now, no knock, no bird,

The traveller said, “Tell them I came and I kept my word.”

 

With a swish of his cloak,

He jumped on his horse,

Sound of metal on stone,

He galloped off on his own.


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PostPosted: Wed Mar 29, 2006 4:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Good one, Enjoyed it
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 29, 2006 12:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Good poem. I hope hear about you like a important writer.
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PostPosted: Fri May 12, 2006 4:40 pm    Post subject: Good poem Reply with quote
hey that was a great poem. I could really feel the atmisphere you were trying to create. U described the surroundings and the feelings beautifully.. keep writting more poems. i would love to read another!

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