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PostPosted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 5:00 am    Post subject: Quick text Reply with quote
Oh ma luv
I've been dreamin'
about j00
every passing day
I thought
dat j00 liked meh
I've luved j00
for about 1 year
then dis one day
dat single day
has changed everthin'
why ma love
did j00 fool me
oh so depressed dat I am
crying all nite
all those unanswered questions
in my head
will I ever know teh truth?

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Well, that one day was yesterday =(
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 5:02 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
lol ROFLMAO.
I know why you wrote it and what it is about, and to be honest, it is pathetic, but deep down, I like it.
It is time to move on. She is ugly anyway.
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 8:55 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
It is pretty good as a story, though not that much as a poem.
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 9:12 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
IamTheKing9 wrote:
It is pretty good as a story, though not that much as a poem.

It's not supposed to be a real poem, I just want to express my feelings, whatever kind of text it is.
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 9:52 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
i think someone is hurt !! may be beacuse someone threw a bomb on his bus!
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 7:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Laurent Van Winckel wrote:
IamTheKing9 wrote:
It is pretty good as a story, though not that much as a poem.

It's not supposed to be a real poem, I just want to express my feelings, whatever kind of text it is.


If it's not supposed to be a real poem, and you wrote it as a story, then, as I wrote, it is pretty good.
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 1:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Hmm.. a little immature..
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 2:15 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Yeah, Laurent is a sore loser at life. The girl he has written about didn't like him to begin with...
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 2:58 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
*cough*lmao*cough*..
heh hem.. What a shame!
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 4:02 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
What is even more sad about him is that he reads e-books about dating, love and relationships. He even showed me one on MSN. He wanted to send it to me, but I wouldn't have read it even if I was unlucky at love. To read such things, you have extinguish your self-respect... :/ Neutral
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 4:33 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Ēćt ™ wrote:
Hmm.. a little immature..


I hope you were talking only about Laurent.
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 4:52 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Eirķkr Rauši wrote:
lol ROFLMAO.
I know why you wrote it and what it is about, and to be honest, it is pathetic...

Yeah, Laurent is a sore loser at life. The girl he has written about didn't like him to begin with...

What is even more sad about him is...


It's just heartwarming to know that he has such a good friend and confidant, to help him through the troubled times.
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 5:02 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
mondine wrote:
Eirķkr Rauši wrote:
lol ROFLMAO.
I know why you wrote it and what it is about, and to be honest, it is pathetic...

Yeah, Laurent is a sore loser at life. The girl he has written about didn't like him to begin with...

What is even more sad about him is...


It's just heartwarming to know that he has such a good friend and confidant, to help him through the troubled times.


To help him? I thought she didn't even like him ( Wink )...
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 5:39 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
mondine wrote:
Eirķkr Rauši wrote:
lol ROFLMAO.
I know why you wrote it and what it is about, and to be honest, it is pathetic...

Yeah, Laurent is a sore loser at life. The girl he has written about didn't like him to begin with...

What is even more sad about him is...


It's just heartwarming to know that he has such a good friend and confidant, to help him through the troubled times.

Razz Well, his depression is kind of immature and pathetic, so this is the best he deserves Wink.
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 6:43 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
THANKS for those GREAT replies!!
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Hmm.. a little immature..: How old are you!?
What is even more sad about him is that he reads e-books about dating, love and relationships. He even showed me one on MSN. He wanted to send it to me, but I wouldn't have read it even if I was unlucky at love. To read such things, you have extinguish your self-respect... :/ : I don't
*cough*lmao*cough*..
heh hem.. What a shame!
: Keep those evil thoughts for yourself
Yeah, Laurent is a sore loser at life. The girl he has written about didn't like him to begin with...: Thanks for mentioning!
i think someone is hurt !! may be beacuse someone threw a bomb on his bus!: Ooh, yes!! It's the bus alright.

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