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Drench my soul with your existence like rain.
Make it so I may never sleep again.
Envelop my mind like a fog on a lake.
Make it so I never want to be awake.
Sink into my body like a disease.
Make me entranced like all my favorite memories.
Drive your image into me like a screw.
Make me want nobody but you.
Shatter my heart like a hammer.
Walk away; ignore it's awful clamor.
Leave me here in this dark corner.
Make me like a soulless mourner.
Eat me from the inside like a parasite.
Kill me slowly like a poison.
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| Posted: Thu Oct 20, 2005 11:38 pm Post subject: |
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Amazing!!! Not bad at all. In fact, it's very good. How did you come up with this one?
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| Posted: Fri Oct 21, 2005 3:59 am Post subject: |
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Hey, not bad.
And congratualtions on having the inaugural post in the new forum. Glad some brave soul finally came along.
Maybe you'll inspire some other artistic-types.
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| Posted: Fri Oct 21, 2005 8:16 am Post subject: |
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Not bad, not bad at all! Is it a song?
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| Posted: Fri Oct 21, 2005 9:14 am Post subject: |
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Sounds very like my chemical romance!
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| Posted: Fri Oct 21, 2005 10:49 am Post subject: |
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nope, it's of my own design. 
I just noticed this new forum the other day, and when I saw that it was empty, I couldn; couldn't resist! 
I sorta came up with it on the spur of the moment. 
Now that I think about it, I remember that I had the song "Something to do With my Hands" by Her Space Holiday in my head while I was writing it. I read it over again (my poem), and I think I might have drawn inspiration from that song, as they sound a little similar.
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| Posted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 1:53 am Post subject: |
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Hope you come up with more poems (or songs?) like this!
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| Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 11:08 am Post subject: |
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Something really bad needs to happen to me so I can write another one.
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| Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 9:42 pm Post subject: |
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| the_slash wrote: | | Something really bad needs to happen to me so I can write another one. |
Something really bad? How come?
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| Posted: Wed Oct 26, 2005 9:15 am Post subject: |
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| IamTheKing9 wrote: | | the_slash wrote: | | Something really bad needs to happen to me so I can write another one. |
Something really bad? How come? |
Well, I guess falling in love would work too, but since I already am in love, that's not really an option. Usually my best poems tend to manifest when I am feeling one of the more intense emotions, such as anger, sorrow, love, etc. It's easier to write "under the influence"
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| Posted: Wed Oct 26, 2005 10:29 pm Post subject: |
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| the_slash wrote: | | IamTheKing9 wrote: | | the_slash wrote: | | Something really bad needs to happen to me so I can write another one. |
Something really bad? How come? |
Well, I guess falling in love would work too, but since I already am in love, that's not really an option. Usually my best poems tend to manifest when I am feeling one of the more intense emotions, such as anger, sorrow, love, etc. It's easier to write "under the influence" |
Hear, hear! A master poet giving a speech! A really good one, at that. And also recommended for anyone who wants to be a good poet.
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